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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The mistake to make Whenever I want— Beside the red lantern . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes, I don't understand your poetry; but, it doesn't really matter. I like the flow and I like how you construct your poems. I also really like how you use words. I don't have my glasses on and thought the title of this one was "Tanana" and I wondered why you were writing about an Alaskan river. Alison |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A brief websearch for the title word helps to at least partially elucidate the poem's meanings. Nicely crafted. |
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