Open Poetry #47 |
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A Few of My Friends |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa ![]() |
A FEW OF MY FRIENDS 14 February 2011 Come sit with me in this garden bower in summer shade and meet some friends I trust and love. Well, first on your left is Choice, in the multi-coloured checked shirt, a tough-love ally, who lets me know I am no slave to anyone or anything and that I am as free as an unborn thought to choose my own consequences; and then there is Responsibility, in black and white, who has led me over many sharp pebbles and rocks, up winding paths on mountains steep – a long, hard hike with blisters and bleeding feet, struggling for breath at times, but oh, the panoramic view from the mountain top - of sky and valleys, plains and hills, and rivers and cattle grazing in green, green fields; and next is Compassion, the sweetie-pie, in an orange sundress, a listener, whose hugs and cups of tea have softened so many of my days and nights; and when I have least deserved this friend, sweet, sweet Grace, in powder-blue, has been there for me with heart smiles and kind eyes; and then . . . my dearest, closest friend of all, Peace-Which-Passes-All-Understanding, in sunrise-gold, against whom I lean my buzzing head when the world’s all wrong and I don’t know why. They are here today to offer you their friendship too and all they ask is that you task yourself with introducing them, their lessons and each gem they offer you, to all you meet in every street. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool Owl...it really hits the spot, thank you. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Smiles, Lori. Glad you liked it. Owl |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, Owl, you speak of some of The Kind Forces, most lyrically; had to write and say, I much enjoyed..>>spiros |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
breathtaking, beautiful and a true joy to read...you've outdone yourself with this one, Owl ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Spiros. There are very many kind forces. One just needs to accept them to have them as friends. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you, Faith. Smiles. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana...I've met some of your friends and they have all told me how lovely you are. ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your friends not only make a great list for a delightful tea-party, but are also great companions on all holidays, special days, sad days, happy days and memorable moments. Thank you for the introductions. ![]() ![]() |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Martie (laughing). What a sweet thing to say! Thank you, Karilea. You are right! Smiles. I am happy to have introduced them to you – but something tells me you actually know them very well yourself! Owl |
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