Open Poetry #47 |
Why The Sky Is Blue |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
WHY THE SKY IS BLUE 11 February 2011 I won’t tell you in Laboratory Logic. I will sing you in Birdsong; I will lift you in Ecstasy; I will whisper you in Joy; I will fly you in Freedom; The sky is blue because blue is the colour of music and magic and mystery; because blue spreads our wings and lifts us up; because blue drives away the blues and wraps us in Infinity; because blue is further than blue than blue than blue. The sky is blue because we want it so. Owl |
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graying1 Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 53The Commonwealth of VA |
Good poem, sound argument |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Beautiful. The repetition gives your poem a musical feeling. Color imagery is well done. A pleasure to read. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Peter. I am glad you think so. Thank you, Bastet, for your kind words. Owl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, that's why it's blue cause it's so beautiful that way and you're right we want it so. I love it when they smile at you. Eric in a relationship the me becomes we. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
that is why i love blue...yes, i see it now...beuatifully written as always There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Diana, I adore the poem, its beauty and its message so accurate, are we willing ? that world, that sky are like us and we are surely a part of them... Thanks for sharing beauty and poetry. yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Eric. I always love your responses. Thank you, Faith. I am glad it brought that to you. Thank you, Yann for your kind and beautiful response. Oh yes, you are SO right. We are all part of Nature and each other. Namaste. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a striking way to say, because it is... a true pleasure to read (and the best thing is that it actually makes sense) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magic, being key. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love how you soar, Owl~
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Steaven. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you, Karilea. Smiles. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Belle. Owl |
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