Open Poetry #47 |
Self-Pity Party - Akita Style |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Placating a homesick dog One hundred pounds Of barking, howling Akita Full of pure want-to-go-home Sadness that no milk bones or pats Can assuage or make up for the fact that She does not want to be with me Honestly? I try to hid the fact That I really don’t want her any longer either The 1:00 am walks have worn me out Looking in her eyes And seeing that I don’t make the grade Is not very fulfilling either. So ~ I whine and she howls And we both just want her To go home! - Alison |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
aww poor dog n poor u |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, DrinaLove. She's a gorgeous dog who is homesick. I am a pet lover who is tired. So I turn to whining in a poem. Happy New Year. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'd be whining too, Alison. Hope you solve the problem soon. Ida |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Not the best way to begin the New Year. When early morning quietness seeps into my being |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not easy to live with a creature that you know really doesn't want to be with you...and worse when you really don't want to be with them, either. Oh, you were talking about a dog?? Always a pleasure, Alison |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is still a sense of love and loyalty in your poem. Sad though~ I feel for you both~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You took us there so well we could see the look in both your unhappy eyes Lori |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, We seem to be working things out. She was howling and fussing so I'd come downstairs with her. Once she realized she had to be where I am and I wasn't going to run to her, she settled down. No 1:00 am walk this morning and a good night sleep for both of us. Love you, A - Jerry, I have high hopes for this year. The reason she is with me is her family burned out on Christmas day. I have the dog and parrot until they can find a house to rent. It could be worse for us all - all of them got out. So, Yay for this new year of 2011. I am more than happy to turn my back on 2010. xoxoxo A - 'Deer, Yep, the dog. F-O-C-U-S on the dog, Man! Love you, Alison - BluesSerenade (have I told you that I love this name?) ~ We are adjusting and becoming fast friends now. Thank you for thinking of us. Alison - Lori, Her eyes are dancing and my are somewhat humorously resigned. I am manipulated by three cats, three dogs and a parrot. My life is chaos!!! A |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah the perils of looking after a friend's dog. Just can't make the grade. Loved this and I sure can visualize the eyes and attitude. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thanks, Eric. One thing about us - we both have plenty of attitude! A |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just wanted to say that I've read this three times and like it very much. Walk the dog backwards. Then be still and know she is god. (I have absolutely no idea what I'm talking about.) Happy New Year, Alison. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Alison, at 1am with the temperatures you have, that must be tremendous! Love this and I am sure you will get along well and when she will go home you will miss her. Love and Happy New Year! Margherita |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I've done this for friends, but I was able to walk my own dog at the same time ... they were both happy and I got a workout |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Karen, I tried the walking the dog backwards and gained a half hour. The coolest idea yet! Thank you and Happy New Year. Alison - Margherita, It's warmed up a lot - we are about 20 above now. And, my newest girlfriend and I are adjusting well. Thank you lots. A - Rex, I think I have a house-full at the moment. I can walk the dogs, but this one howls and barks her deepest bark when she thinks it is time to get her way. Ain't gonna happen. I am winning and now we are all becoming happier. Thank you. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
this was weird but I liked it! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James, Thank you for reading and commenting. Alison - XGarapanX Yeah, homesick dogs are pretty weird. Oh wait - my writing is pretty weird. Umm, the blue on the page is weird too. Oh what the hell, it's all weird. Thanks for liking. A |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Awwww ...shuckies! ooxx Marti I do the <font color=FF6600><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marti, She's still here and has settled in beautifully. She has become part of the "Puppy Pack" (which includes three dogs and three cats). Life is good - if not crowded. xoxoxo A |
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incwrite Member
since 2010-12-31
Posts 55new york |
my dog, Kali, is a older dog, that howls, needs to go out frequently, the radio seems to give her comfort during the night ,,when i need to grab a few moments of sleep.. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hi incwrite. You sound like my kind of person. I leave the radio on for the parrot I am taking care of. Sheba, the Akita, is a love. She is sleeping beside me now. Her "parents" came over yesterday and she was happy to see them, but did not fuss when they left. She has space in my house anytime - thank you for the tips and for taking the time to write and care. Alison |
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