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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
0 posted 2011-02-13 02:10 PM

Valentine’s Day…
I am so hungry of you,
Let us go to the restaurant,
but hello what is
The Valentine’s Day?
It is a lovely cooking
You in my arms
Rolled up by kisses
With a mint loved sauce,
I in your arms
Warmed by sighs
Of laurels
Simmered by confessions,
And words, and words
Which never stop
And explain the origin
Of the world,
and the true pleasure
To offer red roses,
to buy some lipstick
some slice of Moon.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (02-14-2011 10:00 PM).]
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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-02-13 02:11 PM

lovely...just lovely...i enjoyed this a lot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-02-13 05:32 PM

Yann, this is an absolutely delightful, spontaneous response – you have the perfect understanding of what Valentine’s Day is all about.

Owl
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
3 posted 2011-02-14 07:43 PM

what a delightful recipe...and what a beautiful way to think about Valentine's day...enjoyed
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2011-02-15 04:01 PM

thanks Faithmairee for the read and kind comment.

yann
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2011-02-15 04:02 PM

Thanks a lot Owl for the lovely comment.

yann
2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2011-02-16 04:49 AM

oops Stevenr, there was a bug yesterday when I put a comment on line...Thanks for the lovely comment.

yann
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