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Open Poetry #47

Mesmerizing Eyes - Beware

Anoo
Member

since 2011-01-23

Posts 55
UK

0 posted 2011-02-13 12:19 PM

Charming unmistakable eyes
Tempt me to write a few lines
Alluring as the azure skies
Telling the sweetest things but lies
Ever so discreetly whisper secrets that tantalize
For those concerned, here’s my advice:
Before stare into those capturing eyes, think twice
Cause too long a gaze may inevitably hypnotize
Seeking no consent of yours, swiftly whisk you away to paradise

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-13 12:25 PM

this is so romantic and nicely worded...i love your ending line

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-02-13 12:45 PM

Well, going to paradise wouldn't be all that bad would it?
Maybe it would I don't know.

I enjoyed reading this and welcome to PIP you'll enjoy it here.

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-13 12:47 PM

Ah, take me, take me to paradise, if only for a few precious moments . . .

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-02-14 07:31 PM

...smiles & sighs...and yes, off to paradise

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