Open Poetry #47 |
Where Have You Gone? |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Where have you gone? left me here alone unwilling to believe- promises made unable to trust- any truths theres are no more sparkles in my eyes I've caught a cold you see, theres ice around my heart within my soul I need you now more than ever. So... where have you gone? were you even here? how do I keep going on without you My dearest Hope and Faith -Trina |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Quite a call for reconciliation. It is a horrible, sometimes mind-blowing thing to be shut out like this poem describes. Sometimes we don't know how we are going to be able to get through it, but we do, and are usually a better person after having survived. ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a sad and very moving poem... i enjoyed your poem very much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yep, moments without hope and faith are like having a cell phone in a dead zone. Enjoyed this Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very sad but delivers the mood very very well. Such is life sometimes....sigh.. Eric in a relationship the me becomes we. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.. emotion-full..but it flows and reaches and poetry-lovers understand and appreciate .>>spiros ------------- |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Thanx. I appreciate the comments. Just got off from my 12hr shift so I'll return the favor soon. -Trina |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
It is good to read your work again. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Aww Thanx Earl, I always look forward to hearing from you I have a job now ha. so I dont have much time to write, but I write when I can. -Trina |
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