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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Sensitize me to your allergens: Red, White, Blue, or Green and Orange---with Blu-blockers on. Take me to the stores, and poison me a little more. Ten-thousand to one are high odds, you'll see. Round me out in chains. Blame me for your dire confusion. It's okay. It's not okay--- I am trying not to worry about it. Time hurries on, and the earth still turns. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a gripping opening line! love the tone and the humor~~you're genius yourself, my friend~ ~love it~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Revolutions can be breathtaking to watch, and distance allows the luxury of complacence, but just for a little while. As you pointed out, time hurries on. No cookie cutter poem here, dearest easy. I love it.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Works for me, I'm with BG. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very nicely written...i enjoyed it much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Time hurries on, and the earth still turns." ...a great perspective with this...nice write |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thank you all for your very kind comments. Like most of my offerings here this comes from direct experience. bel1e and serenity, you have inspired me to find and relisten REM's Document, which I find as timely now as twenty years ago when it was real dance material. Thank you, and we shall see. |
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