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Open Poetry #47

Equine Lines

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-10 05:57 PM

Equine lines
nostrils flaring air
sun sheened quiver flesh
muscle rippled tense
tail neck erect
hooves move
ready rearing
running
a scent on the wind
LGR(C)2/10/11

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-02-10 06:10 PM

Lovely! Just my kind of poem, Lori.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-02-10 06:45 PM

I've got that in my mind, and a beautiful picture it is too. You are captivating us with these visually constructed poems of yours of late.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-02-10 07:20 PM

stunning...so well-crafted

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-10 11:59 PM

simply lovely...great job, lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

graying1
Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 53
The Commonwealth of VA

5 posted 2011-02-11 06:24 AM

well done

PS

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

6 posted 2011-02-11 08:13 AM

god, I adore horses~

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