Open Poetry #47 |
Ecstasy |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
ECSTASY 20 August 1986 My eagle, who taught me how to fly, Remember the freedom of the blue blue skies, and the sun that warmed our wings. Remember how we dipped and swirled and twirled and dived and pierced the clouds, together. Remember? Remember. Owl |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
my~that is just lovely~~~
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I remember. Although I could hardly believe my eyes. I thought I was having those LSD flashback they always said I was going to have. But you two were beautiful high in the sky as you dove and dipped and glided. Yes, I remember. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Belle, for your kind words. Delighted giggles, Jerry. I am glad you remember! Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
pithily exquisite |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Steaven. You say such lovely things. Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
simply beautiful...a charming poem! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
It shouldn't be so difficult for eagles of this kind to soar and keep on soaring, but this world we're in here is strange sometimes. I enjoyed reading your poem here very much! |
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graying1 Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 53The Commonwealth of VA |
Love this makes me want to fly (might I borrow a feather?) PS |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Faith. I am glad you found it so. Thank you, easy for your appreciative comments. Thank you, graying1. Of course, you may borrow a feather – in fact enough to be able to fly! I have plenty. Smiles. Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Remembering. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Smiles, Karilea. Glad I could bring you those memories. Owl |
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