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Open Poetry #47

Sad Love

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-09 10:08 AM

Lawd, last night I heard you call my name
And I knew I was dreaming just the same.
Lawd, last night I heard you call my name
And I knew I was dreaming just the same.
Sometimes, I think I should have stayed.

Just didn't know what you were thinkin'
When you saw me walking out the door.
Just didn't know what you were thinkin'
When you saw me walking out the door.
Well, I guess it don't matter anymore.

I saw you sitting there by the railroad tracks.
Didn't you have your face down in your hands?
I saw you sitting there by the railroad tracks.
Didn't you have your face down in your hands?
It sure was a sad love that we had.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-02-09 10:17 AM

Sounded like the blues to me. Love it.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-09 10:27 AM

Thanks, friend. I sure am happy you enjoyed it.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-09 11:49 AM

All I needed as I read this Muddy Waters-type blues was a sad harmonica playing in the background. Nice work.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-09 05:25 PM

thank you so much...you made my heart smile, JerryPat

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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