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Open Poetry #47

Gone Bad

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-09 10:07 AM

Today, I saw my baby with somebody else.
Yes, I saw my baby with somebody else.
Now here I am crying all by myself.

He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs.
He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs.
Now, may I ask what he's doing with her?

He promised to love me forever more.
He promised to love me forever more
But he sure don't come around much anymore.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-02-09 10:20 AM

Yep, that's the blues alright. Or crying in your beer country...it's all good.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-09 10:25 AM

Thanks, Lori. I'm glad you enjoyed my little blues song.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-09 11:51 AM

What would the blues do if there wasn't cheating going on, I ask you. This is classic down-home blues.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-09 05:23 PM

good question, my friend...thanks for the wonderful compliment

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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