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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-05 11:47 AM

if i should live to be one hundred
i still shall not forget
the love that lives inside of me
the one that never quits

i found a touch of heaven
in the brush of his fingertips
there was magic in the soft words
he whispered with tender lips

to a woman love is everything
she puts her whole heart in it
and even when all hope is gone
her mind still dabbles in it

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

[This message has been edited by faithmairee (02-05-2011 12:20 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-02-05 01:11 PM

again I say Amen.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-05 01:22 PM

thanks so much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

3 posted 2011-02-05 03:02 PM

I tend to agree that women are much more emotional tied to their lovers/husbands, etc. than men. While we are emotional, so much more of the relationship depend on sex. We may lie about it and deny it, but it is basically how we are. Women are constructed in their fashion, men in theirs . . . Viva la difference!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-02-05 03:44 PM

Like it very much Faith!

I get the point and I know how love can linger sometimes it can be so tough.
Us guys need to be loved too. Sometimes it sticks with us a long time too.

Love the idea and the presentation.

Eric

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2011-02-05 08:37 PM

Good poem.
Agreeing with Eric. We raised three girls and three boys,now men and women.I found the young men faced lost love so much harder than the young women seemed to. I have no reasons,but I found it true. Now I see it once again in a young grandson.Guys hurt as hard or harder than young women. Women just talk or cry better.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-02-05 10:17 PM

"even when all hope is gone
her mind still dabbles in it"

excellent ending to a very fine write...enjoyed

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-02-06 05:30 PM

Hi, Faith. I'm finally here. Love the pic. As far as "when all hope is gone / her mind still dabbles in it" . . . Some can't let go as easy as others, male or female.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-02-08 04:44 PM

thanks everyone...i really appreciate your wonderful remarks

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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