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Open Poetry #47

you have a friend in me

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-04 07:52 PM

i love you for
all you've been
am now and what you'll be
i say it in all sincerity
for you mean that much to me

you have honor
yes, integrity and
your friendship means so
much to me so rest assured
i'll play it fair
for you have a friend in me

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-02-04 08:04 PM

What a wonderful poem for, and from, a dear person.

Check your mail!

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-04 08:10 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Sunshine. I checked it and wrote back!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-02-06 09:07 PM

your title and ending had me humming (was it from 'Toy Story') that song...I love a write that whisks me away...doesn't matter in which way...just love one that can do that...and, this one did

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-02-06 10:29 PM

Ah, you know what, Faith? There must be a peom in here somewhere. Oh, I found it. It begins with the line, "i love you for," and ends with the line, "for you have a friend in me." Take those two lines and add what you have between them and you have a very romantic and honest-from-the-heart poem.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-02-06 11:22 PM

Reminds me of Carole King's 'You've Got A Friend'.
Nicely done Faith and the sincerity is passionate.

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-02-08 04:45 PM

thanks so much you all for your wonderful comments

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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