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Open Poetry #47

Weak End Weekend (Haiku)

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

0 posted 2011-02-04 05:56 PM

Friday to Monday
Weak end at long week’s extend
Five days reverse ways

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-02-04 06:05 PM

This is so clever and so much fun to ponder.

Great work!

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

2 posted 2011-02-04 08:35 PM

I had to stop and think about that. Neat.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-04 09:27 PM

clever and cool...very cool!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2011-02-04 10:20 PM

BlueSerenade: Clever and fun was what I was aiming for. Thanks for the read and write.

Paderewski: Just as long as you weren’t standing in the middle of the intersection. Thanks for looking in.

Faithmairee: Much thanks for the coolness of your response.

Glad you all enjoyed. This one has its origin in a conversation I had with my daughter on the way to school this morning. She commented, “Why is Monday so far away from Friday, but Friday so close to Monday? Who ever created the calendar, sure screwed up.” You gotta love the teenage perspective.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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