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Not just a woman
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Not just a woman |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
Letting loose, trying but I couldn’t Attached, hinged, screwed tight The driver came from behind, unexpected unscrewed Loose, finalized thoughts of someone who’s been through too much Never enough, life keeps blazing it towards, straight at Hold on to me, let us magnetize and reunite, although it’s our first time Understand the feelings, emotions, thoughts, words, and expressions Might not make sense, not all at once, analyze My thoughts of us are deeper then hearts My love for u is more than “he loves me, he loves me not” I’m well aware of the danger ahead, letting loose it’s not something I do Screw me together, loose is not safe, not safe when you’re away Attach me to your side, feelings coming back Not just a woman, please don’t forget A loose screw trying to find my way back, my nature My habitat, my world, Love, I call Not just a woman, not all that I am Human is what I’m described as, in need and in offering Love of not just a woman, but human love Screw it right, screw us |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
DrinaLove, welcome! I saw your work posted and falling down the line. There are so many people posting that we often do not see a post until it has passed on.Don't give up on PIP Your poem sounds deep and low. I hope all is well with you. best to you, latearrival |
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