Dearest Love (love letter challenge)

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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0 posted 2011-02-02 12:05 PM

Dearest Love
(love letter challenge)

Letters of love
I've written many
from a heart full
of hope and promise
Even though
the “Dear to”
may have changed
on the winds of woo
The love I felt
was always true...
at the time

Dearest Love,

How swift, how sweetly you fill me up with joyous and lift me above lonely's domain, breathless in anticipation with countenance radiant. A patient impatience captivates my heart in the absence of pain. You alight my senses to the brilliance of the day. Love, you grace my being in every tender way. You effervesce my essence, keep kindness kindled and jealousy at bay. You gift my heart with contentedness and forgiveness. You gift humanity with it's existence. Love. you bond all things, one to another; be it a mate, motherhood, music, motorcycles, wine, women and words, to the stars in the sky. I pray to know the flow of you and we walk as one until the day I die.

With open heart,
Lori

LGR(C)2/2/11

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-02-02 12:39 PM

Haha! Love "the “Dear to” / may have changed / on the winds of woo" . . .

There is one thing about writing love letters, sometimes the recipient of it finds it difficult to live up to the expectations.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-02 01:01 PM

Jerry, Love, the reciepient of this letter, has always lived up to my expectations.
Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-02-02 01:02 PM

I did NOT mean that personally, Lori. I find that lately I get chastised for these things and I am trying to not personalize things. Maybe I did here, hell I don't know.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

Sunshine

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4 posted 2011-02-02 06:13 PM

Look at you...and on Groundhog's day, no less. When the mammal thinks winter is to last another six weeks, and you, throwing petals into the air!

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

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5 posted 2011-02-02 07:00 PM

how beautiful! this is really great, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-02-02 10:03 PM

"You gift my heart"...just the concept of that brings a smile to the heart...really enjoyed your words...you've answered the challenge quite well, I would say...nicely done

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-02-03 04:08 PM

Sunshine, I tried throwing ground hogs but the effect just wasn't the same.

__________________________________________
Faith, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments.
__________________________________________
Steaven, thanks alot I'm glad you liked it!

Lori

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

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8 posted 2011-02-03 05:39 PM

The poem was wonderful. I love the beginning all the way to the end. You lived up to the challenge indeed. Simply enjoyed it.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-02-03 06:17 PM

Thanks Ken, glad you liked it!
Lori

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