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Eyes on me
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Eyes on me |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
Been seen and observed, over reacted to what I've acted Critique to an extend that might not be met The questions have arisen but the answers are not clasping To the conclusions they've made, nothing makes sense I tell you today what I was once yesterday Opinions and reviews you've all seen and heard, with never ending comments This world, the main report Ask me, for my opinion does not matter, it has not been accounted for The fact sheet is all near, to your reach but can't escort Scattered with facts, what I want for you all The access to the exclusive I have, in my mouth I obtain A statastic that only I can make, the fact to what hasn't been proven yet Not my theory but a made solution to the nonsense The clasp to all the questions, a seat to all that have risen Comfort I bring to those with confusion indeed, to the wandering eyes Just lay it, lay them on, that's all I want I assure you that for once You'll see, but only with eyes on me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting writing Adriana Many unique lines to ponder and tie together. Well presented reasoning. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
thank u. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
feels like an explosion is ready to be born...please continue this... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I don't have much to say except, wowzers! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
Thnx u guys but this wasn't written out of frustation or anything  |
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