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Dear little girl
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Dear little girl |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Dear little girl Little girl in the mirror I just wanted you to know Our nightmare is over… The devil is gone There is no more need to To lie awake listening to the fighting in order to run To Save mommy I remember those nights of fear… The devil in all his shades of red The screams of hell His scrawny hands squeezing the breathe out of her It was always so odd though, How he would be afraid of the angel that would come down to rescue her… He would always turn white…. Dear child You are trapped no more Move on from this mirror You are no longer chained to me As I look in the mirror Tears fall down my face Wee hours of the night Dear little girl We will be great! "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very touching writing. I love the sensitivity of this piece. So good!! Eric the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Eric, thank you! "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very moving write with a perfect air of hope...excellent piece...gonna have to read again...enjoyed immensely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Thank you for reading  "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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