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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
He comes to my room as I sleep I awake as he creeps I see his horns As he says HI Why? I am just a little girl He says I am special Its our little secret I love you daddy Why? I’m your little girl… "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I certainly hope this isn't what I think it is. However, I can only surmise so much. This is very delicate writing. Thanks for sharing. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I needed to go back and read all your contributions again...there is a "I need to keep things in my head while softly shaking it from side to side hoping I have enough heart to relate to it" kind of feeling that I get from your writing...it's that good |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
Kind of writing that certainly makes you gulp! I know the truth behind this nightmare...it's good to see you writing it out as painful as it may be!!! "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Thank you so much for reading. As a child I was told that my poems & stories weren't good enough. After many years of believing this creep of a man, I have decided to put my feelings and emotions on paper. I am captivated that my work is enjoyed!  Thank you!! Rachel "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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