Open Poetry #47 |
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Morning Memories Of Scraping New Year's Off The Walls Of My Soul (redux) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Where are the New Year's mornings of old? No battered hospitality frills nor glaring hospital bills, no police being placated, no shiny new court dates where I must be chastened, no remnants of fires put out in a haste and no food debris nor yesterday's wine scattered for survivors to taste, no broken furniture to see nor wasted nude nymphets sleazy but fine littering the place entangled with house guests they've sincerely just met, though whose names they hadn't quiet gotten yet, no supplications to gods have been used, I'd bet no reputations even were bruised, and here I am up before sundown as if I could choose to survey the place with barely a decent frown on my face, moving around without hair of the dog, not struggling hopelessly at clearing the fog, without even needing to be told what I am and able to face all I did in the night, even the porcelain god seems neglected! I tell you my friends it just doesn't seem right, and this old age stuff isn't what I expected, ©2005, 2011 by icebox [This message has been edited by icebox (01-01-2011 06:09 PM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed the read, icy, and, yes, the old age stuff isn't what was expected but let's hope for a good year in spite of that shall we? My new year's day was spent emptying cupboards in preparation for a move but I told my kids that perhaps I'd rather be sleeping off a hangover - not so sure now after reading your poem. ![]() Helen |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Another good repost. It seems everyone except me and maybe Sunshine has reposted today and I'll admit my effort falls far short of anything else here. I not kidding when I ask it is tradition or something that everyone is reposting? When early morning quietness seeps into my being it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
icebox, with a past like that, I'm surprised you even reached old age! ![]() I never had new year parties like that in my youth. Consider that a complaint! ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I read you and wonder. I, like Mike, have never had a New Year's party like that.We had good times but nothing like I hear about. All our kids used to pop in to our parties, because we just had good clean fun. After they became a little older I can not vouch for them.Parents are the last to know and most, I am sure would prefer not to.LOL Happy New year to you and it must be nice to wake up clear headed.. jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great poem, Mr. Ice. Makes me truly happy that I've never had a hangover. After reading this I am also surprised that you reached old age. Ida |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ice, my friend... been there, done that, and the porcelain gods? Well, they all needed time out now and then... but of course, it could all be because our knees don't bend like they use to and knowing that we are now the ones who are prone to cleaning up after ourselves because for most of us, our parents are gone!... but you are right...and as Jerry noted, we're reposting oldies and goodies....but Jerry might figure out soon...if not for us, and reposting what the newer members/kids might not search for, are the answers to life... and we all have views and clues as to how it could and should be done...and then we clean up our acts, or sometimes we try...and then we leave THAT in our wake...so that the kids among us might realize that they're going to see 2051...and have an insight to our out-a-sight world. ![]() And that, dear friends, is my philo moment. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Isn't it just great to be conscious and ready to greet dawn clear-headed? Powerful slice of memory of times gone, dear Charly. Until a few years ago here it was tradition to throw old broken porcelaine out of the windows at midnight and I tell you I am so glad this doesn't happen anymore. What a mess it was and people didn't always look where they threw their things ... so you can imagine! ![]() ![]() Happy New Year, often things are not like we want them to be, but we can still make the best of what is. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Different world ain't it? Great lines in this! Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
no shiny new court dates? If you happen to have an old mug shot, we could pretend. *laughing* Me? I can't even have a shot in my old mug. ![]() We have earned this day, C. Why--it's international SLEEP day! ![]() (Read the James Patterson, btw. Methinks my mother is just lowering the bar for me...) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Those were some wild and crazy times...I shudder to think. Gawd it was so much fun though!! Awww heck, my youth made me do it!! You captured it all, icebox! The good, the bad and the ugly!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
There's a lot can be said about being a designated driver ... especially the next day ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, old age and marriage wow, I hadn't thought of it but yeah, I think the same thing boy I miss the old days (but I probably wouldn't survive a trip to the past) |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am so glad that you reposted this and I am so glad that I read it. A |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you all for the gift of your time and for your comments. |
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