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Open Poetry #47

THE ECHO OF A WHISPER 4

blankmirrors
Junior Member

since 2010-07-16

Posts 14

0 posted 2011-01-27 03:50 PM

Phrases, my solitary islands,
End, like a shipwrecked day,
In a shout that won't surface.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-27 05:14 PM

Good wordsmithing here, my friend. Taking the language to another level. good.

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-01-27 05:48 PM

Very nice concise carry through with just the right amount of ambiguity.
Good work!
Welcome to PIP by the way, you'll really enjoy it here.

Eric

Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself!

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