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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Hi, How are you? How is life treating you? How is life with your boyfriend? You still happy with your relationship? Its been six months since I've seen you Temptation from me was too much for you to bear so, you let me go how is that decision working out for you? Since then I've searched high and low near and far, wondering where to go Ive seen them all, dated them all young and old they come, they go most with their hands in my pocket wondering how to get in my heart how to lure, feed the id, the ego to the vacancy you left they try, they smile they flirt but it all falls on ears that are deaf insensitive to anything but your touch your voice your smile your quality its been six months do you miss your American your man your friend or am I just one of them your could have beens just one in the list of passed over possibilities of passed-over men |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now isn't this a well written bleeding/pleading from the heart. Nicely done! Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AHA! The title fooled me in... and then I saw! |
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