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Open Poetry #47

Unencumbered

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-20 10:04 AM

When I drift off to sleep
when I open my eyes
you are there
When I have a moment
on my mind
unencumbered
I find you waiting
with your love
for me
It abounds
and surrounds me
assuredly
I am yours to keep
inside my sighs
I wear
when I have a moment
on my mind
unencumbered

LGR©1/20/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-01-20 10:11 AM

Whoa! I love the unencumberedness of this, and the way you are telling your man in no uncertain words how you feel. I imagine he feels the same toward you,

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-01-20 10:19 AM

I imagine so too Jerry

Thanks

Lori

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2012-01-21 11:26 AM

What a beautiful way to express the lingering way a loved one stays within your thoughts. Very much enjoyed this Lori.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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