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Saying what should be said.....so listen
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Saying what should be said.....so listen |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
The things I do see The way you still look at me when we watch tv The way you get up even when ur achey The way you still kiss me in my front seat The way you sometimes just wanna hold me The way you make me laugh,even when you're not trying The way you have a tear on your cheek, but you say you're not crying The things I feel The way you kiss me when i arrive and before i leave The Way you look into my eyes when you say you love me The way you hold my hand for no reason The way you smile every time we meet The way you frown when I have to leave The way you watch as I drive away The way we both wish I could stay Everything else I didnt say There are some things that need to change There are some things that can stay the same That no matter the distance near or far You,my hero,my soulmate, will always have my heart. *hugs* [This message has been edited by twistedpup (01-19-2012 10:19 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
thank you *hugs* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem. I hope they heard you and listened carefully because your words are loud and clearly wonderful. A little sad that you have to leave from time to time. Hopefully you'll be able to stay forever. Ms. E |
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