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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115


0 posted 2012-01-19 09:29 PM



The things I do see
The way you still look at me when we watch tv
The way you get up even when ur achey
The way you still kiss me in my front seat
The way you sometimes just wanna hold me
The way you make me laugh,even when you're not trying
The way you have a tear on your cheek,
but you say you're not crying

The things I feel
The way you kiss me when i arrive and before i leave
The Way you look into my eyes when you say you love me
The way you hold my hand for no reason
The way you smile every time we meet
The way you frown when I have to leave
The way you watch as I drive away
The way we both wish I could stay

Everything else I didnt say
There are some things that need to change
There are some things that can stay the same
That no matter the distance
near or far
You,my hero,my soulmate,
will always have my heart.


*hugs*

[This message has been edited by twistedpup (01-19-2012 10:19 PM).]

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2012-01-19 09:42 PM


Very nice write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

twistedpup
Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

2 posted 2012-01-21 11:19 PM


thank you

*hugs*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
3 posted 2012-01-28 03:35 PM


Enjoyed your poem.
I hope they heard you and listened carefully because your words are loud and clearly wonderful. A little sad that you have to leave from time to time. Hopefully you'll be able to stay forever.
Ms. E

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