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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2012-01-18 06:39 AM



I could hear what you said with your eyes
when they wrote those words on my skin slowly
making perfect letters like from mouths
leaving a kiss on a window for some tomorrow

you said it was a list under construction
everything I could imagine you imagining
and then reciting like a pledge of allegiance
not to the flag but to the pole you slid down

when there was a fire and you had water enough
to make everything keep burning for hours
and you said you liked that urgency better
than ironing your proper gloves after praying

and some day you would touch me without them


___________

daark



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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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1 posted 2012-01-18 09:23 AM


Fine romantic, sesual poetry...well done as always, DS.

Maybe one should never hope for the gloves to come off? Perhaps it might end the sensual journey, and then there would be nothing to look forward to, in a sexual progressive way...A hiding of the hand may enhance the intrigue..The feminine mystique, to me is arousing.

Loved this poem

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-18 09:55 AM


Iceamigo..10/4 on the gloves...they don't have to wear anything else at all if they don't want to..just the gloves..geeze that sounded cheeky huh..thanks guy
bel1e
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3 posted 2012-01-18 10:34 AM


I'm still stuck on the flagpole comment....

LOL

~*~love how you do naughty, daddy dear~*~

             

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-18 10:41 AM


BBBel1e...you would stick to that huh...thanks little one
bel1e
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5 posted 2012-01-18 12:12 PM




             

Nicole
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6 posted 2012-01-18 08:54 PM


You would hide the gloves anyway.  lol
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2012-01-19 06:10 AM


Ms Nicole..shhhhhhhhh..that was a secret.  Thanks lady
Margherita
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8 posted 2012-01-19 09:26 AM


Your mind is fascinating, I said that before no doubt, but what you do with words (and imagery) is not just amazing, it is like the discovery of a new island, that has never been there, and was ejected by a volcano that can't be seen. A surprise gift somehow.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2012-01-19 10:05 AM


Ms Mar, thank you for your blessing glances lady friend..
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