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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-17 06:35 AM

I give to you my throbbing
saturated with life itself
engorged with visions of you
I know it sounds temerarious
but I crave you more and more each day
I need you in my playpen
'cause I'm in it for whatever comes tomorrow
I know . . . I know . . .
my exuberance astounds even myself
as things stand in limbo
except our actions
white hot and searing
I live with the fiery love I give
I'm as true to my decision of our yesterdays
holding onto it sempiternal

©January 16, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-01-17 06:58 AM

Loved your words, JP, "white hot and searing... Sempiternal" I'm so happy for the love you have in your life.
Ms. E

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2012-01-17 07:24 AM

Very nice, young man.
Enjoyable read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-01-17 08:01 AM

Appreciate your kind words, Ms. E, have a beautiful day.

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Where;s that young man you speak of, JL? Just kidding, I understand the reference, and I thank you for it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-01-17 08:10 AM

You are on a white hot roll and I am very happy for you my friend!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-01-17 08:13 AM

Many thanks, Lori . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

6 posted 2012-01-17 08:46 AM

the passion in this stirs the very page, Mr. Pat~~~

~write-on~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-01-17 08:47 AM

Baby Girl, many thanks for your inspiring comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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