Open Poetry #47 |
Of Genius and Insanity |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Of Genius and Insanity (Rocking one side to another) She lives on a line between genius and insanity… Inside a blurred opaque blister awaiting death or birth – she roams across one side to the other, inside, and veiled from inquiry. She is supplementary and flattering to each side, yet distinct… Although separated by a micro-thin membrane each side is the equal and she passes through without any pain, she understands: ‘Nowhere cannot be’ And no one cannot be nowhere Thus her judgment – ‘If something is nowhere that something cannot exist.’ Nonetheless, her mind is filled with a fervent love, yet she perceives that love to be nowhere so she then concludes, it cannot be. Existing to listen to her heart inventing to be who she is. But then she asks: ‘Who am I? Am I seen as lovely as I can think of me to be?’ Like a ghost she penetrates that blistered membrane one side to the other with closed eyes and disregarding her words from the day before, and folding those thoughts into diverted faded whispers, she soon begins to sing… Her words are on one side of the blister, and her songs on the other – they serve to combine into her screaming, and she arranges those sounds so as to write another song and another, and another… And no one has stopped to listen, no one can understand. Offering her only glazed stares. She sees and hears their words and understands fully amazed – ‘Does no one comprehend? I am exactly as I have been, and I am, In the same place where I have always been: It’s nowhere you can visit.’ ≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡≡ JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I, for my part, never mind the wine I have consumed tonight, am completely confused. I think I shall leave it at that. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Makes sense to me JL. Lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Jerry, thanks! I appreciate you stopping in for a read. ____________________ Lori, Thanks girl! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Her words are on one side of the blister, and her songs on the other – they serve to combine into her screaming, and she arranges those sounds so as to write another song and another, and another… And no one has stopped to listen, no one can understand. Offering her only glazed stares. Genius and Insanity, Mania and Despair, Life and Death... none more than a breath apart. I really like this, my friend... and the pondering it invites. *S* |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Sounds like me most mornings! LOL...enjoyed this immensely, JL !
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
JL - I'm inclined to think there's more truth and insight in this write than can perhaps be appreciated. In any case, I think it's brilliant! Helen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ruth, Thank you and I like the “no more than a breath apart” idea. Glad you could stop in to ponder. -------------------------------------------- bel1e, I’m sure this does not sound like you… haahahahaaa, glad you enjoyed. -------------------------------------------- Helen, do you always read between the lines? LOL. Thank you for your kind reply. Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
I do not know her...or anyone like her...but then again, after reading your write, it seems I almost do know her...hmmmm |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
luminosity, Thank you. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
great write...excellent |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
JL - I also see things that aren't there. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Magnus, Thank you sir. =============================== Helen, what's missing? LOL, me? Thank you. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
‘If something is nowhere that something cannot exist.’ She hasn't met Schrödinger's cat, then. lol sorry, waxing quantum for a minute. I think there's a bit of this that a lot of people can relate to; I certainly know that I can. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
LOL , from quantum physics to a place which cannot be nowhere, else it wouldn't be... I think you have something here. Darn you hurt my brain thinking about that! Thanks Nichol, you made my day!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Her words are on one side of the blister, and her songs on the other – they serve to combine into her screaming, and she arranges those sounds so as to write another song and another, and another… as always, you articulate such paintings in the mind.... enjoyed... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
JL, this is an amazing write. Forgive me for not replying to it sooner... I have read it many times now, and always with a profound silence looming over me when I am done. Words alone cannot expressd for me the appreciation i have for this one, I have deduced. It touched me on a very personal level. Michael |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lee J JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Michael: Thank you sir, I am so glad you could relate. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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