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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-01-14 08:49 PM


sweet memories in the making
shading in the winsome flower
opening petals without shame
fingers through brownish mane
pulsating desire ask no quarter
manifested in craving honest want
works best as in the coupling
delicate flowers and stems thrusting
beauty vulnerable drawn to the mating
of grace and bloom nighttime flowering
flower coverlet speaks of beauty
of the stem, the standing tall stem
together a remarkable spectacle
with edible parts

©January 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2012-01-14 09:03 PM


interesting !
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-14 09:11 PM


Hahaha! Thanks, secondhanddreampoet . . .

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Michael
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3 posted 2012-01-15 01:25 AM


Hey, JP, it's a new year... Whadda ya say we start fresh?  My words were not taken the way I intended last you spoke with me.  They were meant in a light hearted manner... A place I don't traverse too often and so maybe that had something to do with the miscommunication.  Either way, I still read you and relate well to you on alot of your stuff... And if you don't mind, I wouldn't mind saying so once in awhile.

Michael

But, just for the record, I still don't wanna see you naked.  

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JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-01-15 06:32 AM


Sounds like a good thing, Michael. I still read you also. A reaching out is all it take most of the time, and I've wanted to, hardheadedness kept me from doing it. So, I agree, let us start acting like grownups.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-01-15 09:11 AM


This almost has a mystical quality to it my friend, I like it very much


Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-01-15 09:21 AM


It was written for a  very mystical-like person, that is probably why, Lori. Thanks for being here.

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Michael
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7 posted 2012-01-15 03:13 PM


Thank you, Jerry.

Michael

JL
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8 posted 2012-01-15 03:39 PM


Mystical, musical, smooth.

Nice one Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2012-01-15 04:06 PM


Nada, Michael. Let the good times roll ...

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Thanks, JL, appreciate your kind words . . .

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bel1e
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10 posted 2012-01-15 06:08 PM


Ohhh...another lovely spill, Mr. Pat!

             

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-01-15 06:24 PM


Thank you so much, Baby Girl. I'm honored.

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