Open Poetry #47 |
Nighttime Flowering |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
sweet memories in the making shading in the winsome flower opening petals without shame fingers through brownish mane pulsating desire ask no quarter manifested in craving honest want works best as in the coupling delicate flowers and stems thrusting beauty vulnerable drawn to the mating of grace and bloom nighttime flowering flower coverlet speaks of beauty of the stem, the standing tall stem together a remarkable spectacle with edible parts ©January 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-14-2012 10:17 PM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting ! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hahaha! Thanks, secondhanddreampoet . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey, JP, it's a new year... Whadda ya say we start fresh? My words were not taken the way I intended last you spoke with me. They were meant in a light hearted manner... A place I don't traverse too often and so maybe that had something to do with the miscommunication. Either way, I still read you and relate well to you on alot of your stuff... And if you don't mind, I wouldn't mind saying so once in awhile. Michael But, just for the record, I still don't wanna see you naked. [This message has been edited by Michael (01-15-2012 02:19 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sounds like a good thing, Michael. I still read you also. A reaching out is all it take most of the time, and I've wanted to, hardheadedness kept me from doing it. So, I agree, let us start acting like grownups. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-15-2012 09:29 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This almost has a mystical quality to it my friend, I like it very much Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It was written for a very mystical-like person, that is probably why, Lori. Thanks for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thank you, Jerry. Michael |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Mystical, musical, smooth. Nice one Jerry. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nada, Michael. Let the good times roll ... <><> Thanks, JL, appreciate your kind words . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Ohhh...another lovely spill, Mr. Pat!
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Baby Girl. I'm honored. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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