Open Poetry #47 |
Flying with Your Wings |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
FLYING WITH YOUR WINGS 14 January 2012 You wrap your sigh-soft words around me, like a gossamer skin and I stretch gently, so gently, cat-happy, deep-breathing, on tiptoes, arms curved around your words to hold them like foam-bath bubbles and blow mine back at you, back arched, feeling your masked knight-in-melting-armour messages, smiling at me, dancing around me and with me, teasing, advancing and retiring, lifting me, flying me, painting their magic, hiding and calling my name, in love-fun-laughter, but always there, your dewdrop whisper-words in your moonlight and my sunlight and not a single thread has ever nor will ever be broken, and this I vow in your honour, yes, your honour, my Super Spiderman hero. Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (01-15-2012 12:46 AM).] |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Beautiful Owl, really really beautiful thanks for sharing |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Brad. I am glad you like it so much. Owl |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Dew-drop-whisper words and melting armor... Lovely imagery and a beautiful message, Diane. A pleasure to read. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enchanting words strung together with the finest threads of imagination, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Michael, for your kind words. Thank you Ida, for your beautiful related reply. Owl |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Cat stretches are the best, aren't they? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such fantastic imagery for an enchanting love game. You have borrowed wings? Your own wings are in perfect asset, but ohhh how the inspirational winds make them fly high and higher ... Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, yes, Nicole. You are so right. It is such a pleasure to watch my Cleo (and was such a pleasure to watch my Tigger) stretching! Cats stretch with such feline grace, beauty, ecstasy and focus! Thank you for reading and loving cats. Margherita, thank you. What a sweet thing to say! Owl |
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