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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-01-14 05:00 PM


                   Alone

Alone,  I remain …

astounded by all that love could be
saddened by all that love is not
mystified by what love really is …

I remain, alone

                 --- b. e. adams

© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-01-14 05:13 PM


I know the feeling, secondhanddreampoet, or rather I did until recently. Sometimes things happen very unexpectedly for the good . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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2 posted 2012-01-15 12:10 PM


Your poem makes my heart hurt, Bruce.

xoxoxo
Alison

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3 posted 2012-01-15 01:43 AM


Astounded by all love can be... Yep, right there with you on this one, bud.  You said a mouthful.

Michael

Nicole
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4 posted 2012-01-15 10:57 AM


Love can be such a grand and wonderful thing; and also so devastating at the same time.  A rose with it's thorns...though that doesn't keep any of us from seeking it out, that is our nature.  The same can be said for solitude, or being 'alone'.  It can hurt, ache... but sometimes, when I am alone and surrounded by everything that is so much larger than I am - I am only then, truly peaceful.  The answer (which I've never found /grin) lies somewhere in the middle of all of that.  This is very nice, I enjoyed it.

Margherita
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5 posted 2012-01-15 11:03 AM


quote:
mystified by what love really is …



And what is it? It is the very essence of life ... and though we feel sometimes separated from the Source of LOVE, we are NOT. EVER!

I know the feeling and you express it well, but the feeling grabs us when we are not aligned to All there is.

You always search deeply and you are touched by the grace of LOVE.

Margherita

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6 posted 2012-01-16 01:22 AM


astounded by all that love could be
saddened by all that love is not

I identify so completely with every word... it's like you've written my life in 5 lines and encompassed everything. *S* Beautiful write that's going into my library!

OwlSA
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7 posted 2012-01-16 02:31 PM


Very poignant and beautiful, Bruce.

Sometimes "alone" can be good.  Smiles.

Owl

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8 posted 2012-01-16 11:10 PM


Your words are so true.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

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