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April & Tomas |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Her arms lightly crossed into his lap Like a low echo Running through the forest As the night prepared for shadows to be amongst itÕs land Her feet slightly curled into his Where her toes could feel the ground The dirt, like lather, onto their skins She changed sides Her left arm becoming slightly numb But her body never left his side Closer and closer The wind gently guided Her head towards his chest Towards a blanket that Left the scope of winter At a strong unrest She could tell him the lies of his skin But never could summon the urge Once she looked into his eyes The torrid pace of the night With a pause to these two small souls United by one. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on! There's so much to learn from those natural arrangements... Muskrat, muskrat candlelight Doin' the town and doin' it right In the evenin' It's pretty pleasin' Muskrat Susie, Muskrat Sam Do the jitterbug out in muskrat land And they shimmy And Sammy's so skinny And they whirled and they twirled and they tangoed Singin' and jingin' the jango Floatin' like the heavens above It looks like muskrat love Nibbling on bacon, chewin' on cheese Sammy says to Susie "Honey, would you please be my missus?" And she say yes With her kisses And now he's ticklin' her fancy Rubbin' her toes Muzzle to muzzle, now anything goes As they wriggle, and Sue starts to giggle And they whirled and they twirled and they tangoed Singin' and jingin' the jango Floatin' like the heavens above It looks like muskrat love Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Hah, I enjoyed that, Eric...have a great weekend Tomer |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"She could tell him the lies of his skin But never could summon the urge Once she looked into his eyes" Wow, the above-noted verse just took my breath away! Enjoyed the read...  *~Coco~* |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Coco, means a great deal. Happy you enjoyed that particular stanza. Take care Cheers |
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