Open Poetry #47 |
lady tree on tiptoe |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you mentioned tiptoes and baby steps said the water was warm and inviting but you didn't know how deep it was and would I go in ahead of you slowly I reached back often to make you swim but your eyes dove in beyond my wanting and I felt you swimming around under then up and into my soul like sunlight there were stepping stones in our ocean you said they were funny to jump onto and then off of again, where my arms were and you called them love tree safety and left your dress high up on my eyes _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-13-2012 11:40 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: mmmmmmm ... a poem like this one for dessert, instead of chocolate, can have quite healthy effects! Very lovely. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Mar...thanks lady friend...and it is made with skin milk... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love the playfulness in this, darkieee~ ~brought an image of a mermaid to mind...and I have a thing for mermaids...LOVED it
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBgirl...the mermaids are not safe around you...thanks daughter |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ha ha ha~~ I just literally laughed out loud...I have been itching to write a series of mermaid poems...and just don't have the right feel for it yet....but you're right...nothing is sacred...and they are in terrible, terrible danger...LOL XOXOXOX Thanks for the smiles today ~ ~little one~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I think this could probably bring out the little mermaid in anyone. /smiles |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...thank you lady eyes for the touch |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Lovely write. Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MS E, thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your twist of words always make me smile, and even better are your replies ( skin milk) M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs...thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
then up and into my soul like sunlight And once that happens, baby steps become leaps. *S* You paint so many images with your wonderful phrasings... and give my imagination flight. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern.. thanks so much lady |
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