Open Poetry #47 |
Shoodle-Doodles |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
shoodle-doodles danced into the belly of sunlit beams while segregated panes warmed them and Sunlight imprisoned them forever - Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (01-14-2012 06:08 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Rich in imagination. You have captured those "shoodle doodles" so well, Alison. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, dear Ida. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ali-san...not sure how to respond...just pretend I said something clever [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-13-2012 08:48 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I can visualize this spectacle of light and love to linger in its warmth. A celestial cupcake, ecco! Hugs. Margherita |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love how this lights up the page~
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ah-Ha! I remember Shoodle-Doodles from "The Kitchen Table" Which you posted a few years ago. I also remember trying to find the definition of a Shoodle-Doodle. Had me smiling then, and now. Enjoyed!! Too darn cute... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark - you are always clever. Thank you. ms ali-san |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful Margherita - I know you always see beauty ... Or do it seems. This makes you very special to me. xoxoxo Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Baby Girl ~. Thank you so so much!!! A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dear JL ... Wow! How did you EVER remember "The Kitchen Table" & the Shoodle-Doodles? You deserve to hear the story, my dear friend When I was a baby I would sit in the sun beam that came through the window. I would try to catch the dust that danced in the light. I called them Shoodle-Doodles. So see - this is an original Alison word. Thank you - you brought me much joy today! Xoxoxo Alison ~ lover of Shoodle-Doodles |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
NO! You brought ME joy with that cute little story. Thank you for sharing. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I...was hoping the definition of shoodle-doodles would come out in the replies. What a truly awesome word. This made me feel the sun, and match it in like kind with a smile. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I could see this clearly in my mind as I read. Almost a deja vu effect.I'll admit the title had me thinking of snicker doodles dancing into my belly before I read the poem, though. Nicely done. Michael |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
JL A - Nicole Thank you from my heart. xoxoxo A - Michael, My very favorite cookies are Snickerdoodles. They are the first cookie I learned to bake. Loved them so much I named my first cat Snicerdoodle when I was five. Thank you so much! xoxoxo A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Haahaaahaaaa! A, You are hypnotizing me with that spinning smiley face... You're the Egg McMuffin® of poetry. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the name and love the poem (and love snickerdoodles, too! LOL) This is a smile maker! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And Shoodle-Doodles, Snickerdoodles and I love you too, suthern! xoxoxo A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
JL Look into my eyes. Look into my eyes .. Look into .. MY EYES A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
((( ))) ---------------- JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love dust motes... they have a life that only Horton might hear, yet they sparkle for all... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I like your new word. Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Who? Horton? As in Horton hatches a Who? Love it, Karilea. xoxoxo A - Ms E My language is sprinkled with Alison words. Thank you for enjoying. xoxo A |
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