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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-01-12 05:14 PM


Baby You Can Drive My Car

She's looking good
she looking fine
its no wonder
I want to
make her mine.
I like the way
she talks to me,
touching me
soft & tenderly.
I have a well placed kiss
to plant upon her tender lips.
We good be close
we could be far
a woman like her
could drive my
brand new car.

JamesLee
12January
2012




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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2012-01-12 05:23 PM


Does she wanna be famous,
a star on the screen?
She can always do something in between...

Shades of the Beatles...

Fine writing, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-01-12 05:33 PM


Hell yes, drive my car, baby! Gotta love it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2012-01-12 07:00 PM


Now that's the greatest proof of deep involvement, when you let her drive your brand new car.

Lovely!

Margherita

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