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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-01-11 04:51 PM


Love...As Free As A Bird


Love isn't afraid,
and so...love isn't afraid
to let go.

People are afraid.
People that
are clingy
and needy
and desperate.

Love will
have none
of that.

Love is as
free as a bird.


JamesLee
10January
2012

  

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-01-11 05:06 PM


You nailed it, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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2 posted 2012-01-11 05:12 PM


Indeed...

You said a bunch with very few words here.

Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-01-11 08:53 PM


"Love is as
free as a bird."


Just need to keep an eye out for the vultures...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

bel1e
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4 posted 2012-01-12 05:35 AM


amen to that!

Great Poem!

             

Margherita
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5 posted 2012-01-12 05:39 PM


You wise man you, you got that right!

I love this, dear James.

Margherita

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6 posted 2012-01-16 12:32 PM


Many people listen to their fears instead of love's needs and end up strangling it... keeping it in their clasp even if they lose the essense of it in the process. Beautiful write!

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