Open Poetry #47 |
crossing the lines |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you wrote a story then, the sigh woman song that woman of you in boots with heels and her jaunty gown with wind and hem you peeled away your last two lines after because you knew they were too important the most important part of your story perhaps with not so much how you got me there slowly but more what was waiting for me at the end so you erased those clues quickly on purpose and waited for me to ask for them out loud not just to let me read the words with my eyes but to taste them on purpose from your lips and then watch you smile after, and then forever ______ daark |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
sigh...
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBGirl...I do enjoy making my little girl sigh..thanks babe |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh...my goodness. You certainly know how to make a bird sing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Nicole...thank you, one of the gifts of being deaf is give voice to silence. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
but to taste them on purpose from your lips and then watch you smile after, and then forever Your last two lines are such a delight, that we can only sigh in reading them. Very captivating! Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you do, it is fine. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend ____________ sweeetsun, thank you pretty one |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
so you erased those clues quickly on purpose and waited for me to ask for them out loud not just to let me read the words with my eyes but to taste them on purpose from your lips and then watch you smile after, and then forever Some endings are worth working for. *S* I enjoyed this very much! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern Thank you babe |
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