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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-01-09 09:00 AM

we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between
using words we found at random
but they fit our needs with gloving

you said it was cold against you
that wall of your protective caution
so I slipped in between you there
where you were wearing my exposure

you looked at me with your eyes
but touched me with your mind ends
leaning over my boldest gifting
and hurting yourself slowly often

I mentioned you wore lovely colors
you changed back into blush again
but didn't wear it for very long
as you said what we had between us

should always be only our sin skins

_____________

daark

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2012-01-09 08:52 PM

Who knew something cold could be that warm.

I like how you paint her.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2012-01-10 04:59 AM

great read! love the interesting visual.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2012-01-10 06:22 AM

Ms Nicole, thank you lady friend

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Ms Tracie, thank you for the eyes on this one

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

4 posted 2012-01-10 10:12 AM

seductive as ever, Dark One~*~*~

XOXO

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2012-01-10 10:50 AM

Thanks BBGirl..

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-16 12:26 PM

You often tell a story in just a line... Here, it took a while for me to get past the first line... for memories slapped my face and dragged me under... and then I had to mourn joy all over again... and I've already attended its funeral too many times. *S* But I'm glad I fought the fight and persevered to read the more... you had more stories to tell and I appreciate them all. *S*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-01-16 08:55 AM

we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between

Such an enchanted tree scene you paint with your words, dear D.!

Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2012-01-16 11:05 AM

ms suthern, thank you special lady

___________

ms mar, thank youi lady, friend

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2012-01-16 12:32 PM

we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between
using words we found at random
but they fit our needs with gloving

************************************
No gloves needed on these bareback branches
when you tickle my leaves in all the
right places

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2012-01-16 12:40 PM

ms Rose..thanks lady friend

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2012-01-18 01:30 AM

You say tell the story so well. You know I love how you use words.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2012-01-18 06:27 AM

ms ali-san, thank you lady

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