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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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KNOW 31 December 2011 She wanted him to know that however distantly removed and in however many ways, and for however long, there would always be waves of care and share and intimacy and intense love and passion washing and watching over him from far across the seas in whisper words immortalised in the birth of dawn and dusk. Owl |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ahhh an ethereal tribute and a sweet cooing promise~*~ ~lovely, Owl~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A haunting beauty, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Belle and Ida. Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Know" act 2, scene 1 At dawn, seabirds lift, Their wings Thruming codes Suspended by time; Sounds over pinions rose, Vibrating Like ribbons Drawn taught in the wind. By twisting, they drum Messages steeped from oxygen, Only she and he can hear: Emotions travelling at lightspeed, Until they reach receptive ears. From the sea, unspoken, an answer In the wet hiss of foam.. Intensity, love, and passion As the day dark stars, appear The numinous beings lay down- Lancaster, and Kerr, An oceans distance apart; Yet the waves roll over them As they kiss From there to eternity. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! a wonderful write most enjoyed. Love is the life of the soul... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, wow, Ford! You blow me away! This is so very, very beautiful. Thank you. Thank you, Tracie, for your kind words. Owl |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Gorgeous Diana. I could feel the intensness. Well done my friend. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Marcia. Smiles. It was intensely meant. I am glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
really beautiful |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Tomer. I am glad you found it so. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
there would always be waves of care and share and intimacy and intense love and passion washing and watching over him I've sent such waves... and can only hope they were cherished... or some comfort... or at least not flicked away or tossed into a rubbish bin. *S* This is a beautiful write from a loving heart!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your kind words, Ruth. My inspiration is . . . well, . . . inspirational! I am sure your words were cherished. Any man who didn't cherish them is not worthy of our Ruth! Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I can feel the longing that he know this, Owly one. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Owl, your touchingly beautiful words must feel to the receiver as fulfilling and inspiring as the rising sun. Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Alison. Yes, it was very important to me. Smiles. Thank you Margherita. He leads me to believe that they are exactly that to him. Smiles. Owl |
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