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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us of all the roads I have taken of all the people I have known of all the women I have had it will be your name I whisper moments 'ere my last breath ©January 7, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-07-2012 03:52 PM).] |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ah, the ethereal ambiance of feathers. They do etch deeply.... and you know where angels fear to tread  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, that is an angel whispering, Klassy Lassy. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Stunning! You are amazing! Speechless... Lori |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'Romanticism' and choice of photo-imagery. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
How lovely is that~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lori, thank you so much for reading and saying such nice things about my poem. <><> I kinda thought the feather was an angel's whisper, secondhanddreampoet. Thank you for being here. <><> I appreciate your kind comment, bel1e. thank you so much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-07-2012 08:08 PM).] |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
WOW!!! Great picture to go with your heartfelt poem. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh,heartfelt it surely was, Kat. Thank you very much for being here in my world. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
JP, this poem sent electricity from the top of my head down through my toes. BEAUTIFUL, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It is comments such as yours, Ms. E, that tell me I was right in posting this poem so dear to my heart. Thank you very, very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
YOU, my friend are very welcome. Ms. E |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
breathtaking Jerry, this is divine! Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Haunting and lovely message, Jerry. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your kind words, tracie66. <><> Thank you very much, Ida. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Heartfelt poetry, Jerry. Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate it, JL, I sure felt it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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