Open Poetry #47 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
My mind has strayed far away from love’s so many struggles as if it needed time apart to rejuvenate the soul. But soul (that’s me) knows mind can’t stay for too long far away because it’s the keeper of my love for you, the believer of my worthiness, the treasurer of priceless gifts, and the chaperon of pain. Though good it may be for a time to mindless whittle down the days I think it’s time now, yes, indeed to join again and simply be all I am and have to be in the year two thousand twelve! Helen/3 January 2012 (Still a month and a bit to go before life gets back to "normal".) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice work with this poem, Helen, and being all you can be is the sure-fire way to be extraordinary. Got for it . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Jerry. Thanks and, yes, let's all go for it. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
YES!! Happy New Year!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, JL. May it be a good one for you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Helen, so nice to see you back and with one of your profoundly reflective poems, that I appreciate greatly! Have a wonderful 2012 and ... may "normal" mean FANTASTIC! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
well penned! Love is the life of the soul... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have missed your poetry, Helen. I like this one and wish you only happiness for this new year. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Margherita, Tracie and Alison. I have missed being here but do still manage to pop in for a read every now and again. May it be a happy 2012 for everyone! Helen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A great reminder to live in the "now". April slips through one's fingers all to quickly, and December is all too willing to leave the absent behind. Helen, the wisdom here is crying at the lock, and I feel too often like Wee Willy Winky running through the town, upstairs and downstairs in his nightgown... *blush* Thank you. I'd best get with it! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effective 'write' ... especially fine beginning!: "My mind has strayed far away from love’s so many struggles as if it needed time apart to rejuvenate the soul." |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Karen and Bruce! Yes, time to "get with it". Ok - with what? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hoppy 2012, Helen. Hope things get back to normal soon. Ida |
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