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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2012-01-03 06:24 PM


My mind has strayed far away
from love’s so many struggles
as if it needed time apart
to rejuvenate the soul.

But soul (that’s me) knows mind can’t stay
for too long far away
because it’s the keeper of my love for you,
the believer of my worthiness,
the treasurer of priceless gifts,
and the chaperon of pain.

Though good it may be for a time
to mindless whittle down the days
I think it’s time now, yes, indeed
to join again and simply be
all I am and have to be
in the year two thousand twelve!

Helen/3 January 2012

(Still a month and a bit to go before life gets back to "normal".)

© Copyright 2012 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-01-03 06:43 PM


Nice work with this poem, Helen, and being all you can be is the sure-fire way to be extraordinary. Got for it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2012-01-03 06:46 PM


Hi Jerry.  Thanks and, yes, let's all go for it.  
JL
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3 posted 2012-01-03 08:37 PM


YES!!



Happy New Year!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2012-01-03 10:16 PM


Thanks, JL.  May it be a good one for you.
Margherita
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5 posted 2012-01-04 04:15 AM


Dear Helen, so nice to see you back and with one of your profoundly reflective poems, that I appreciate greatly!

Have a wonderful 2012 and ... may "normal" mean FANTASTIC!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

tracie66
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6 posted 2012-01-05 04:29 AM


well penned!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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7 posted 2012-01-07 01:31 AM


I have missed your poetry, Helen.  I like this one and wish you only happiness for this new year.

Alison

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2012-01-07 01:36 AM


Thank you Margherita, Tracie and Alison.  I have missed being here but do still manage to pop in for a read every now and again.  May it be a happy 2012 for everyone!

Helen

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2012-01-07 04:33 PM


A great reminder to live in the "now". April slips through one's fingers all to quickly, and December is all too willing to leave the absent behind.  

Helen, the wisdom here is crying at the lock, and I feel too often like Wee Willy Winky running through the town, upstairs and downstairs in his nightgown... *blush*    

Thank you.  I'd best get with it!  

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2012-01-07 05:37 PM


effective 'write' ...

especially fine beginning!:

"My mind has strayed far away
  from love’s so many struggles
  as if it needed time apart
  to rejuvenate the soul."

Honeybunch
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11 posted 2012-01-08 01:59 AM


Thank you, Karen and Bruce!  Yes, time to "get with it".     Ok - with what?
Marchmadness
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12 posted 2012-01-08 05:41 AM


Hoppy 2012, Helen. Hope things get back to normal soon.
                           Ida

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