Open Poetry #47 |
Heart beat.. |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Heart glad Heart sings Heart beats to the tune of your drum and for that I am thankful Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And my heart is glad too, that your heart sings, dear Roniece. This is very lovely. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
As we should all be thankful for the different heartbeats. Although, it is when we discover another heart which beats as one with ours is the ultimate. Your poem points out many possibilities. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
so very sweet this little write Love is the life of the soul... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. Hoping the drumming continues. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Would that be the different drummer? Very nice. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
I could feel the beat of this one. A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sounds just like me every morning when my feet hit the floor... wonderful, j. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely little gem, Roniece. Helen |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hmmmm... this makes me feel happy Roniece! nicely done! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
this just makes me smile I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
cute 'write' (finely succinct) ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Roniece. Ida |
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