Open Poetry #47 |
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Hand Held Out |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Hand Held Out . . . and there is sleep troubled and sparce, and day again, and light, new eyes seeking yours, question: who are you? hiding behind veils of your own making . . . bleeding by choice, frozen emotions, your own choosing, avoiding the warmth, hovering around your soul. The warmth, the reality offered by the hand held out . . . to you. © wesley james beard, jr. january 1, 2012 |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love how you write and your writing makes me feel. A |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haunting and Poeish in my thinking is this one, j. Emotion rampant with the side-long glances of the desired, but aloof one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Alison hit the bull's eye. Your words are felt. Enjoyed, my friend. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's very hard to reach through to someone through that veil; regardless of their reasons for hiding behind it. I felt this one, m'friend. |
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