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Open Poetry #47

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2012-01-01 12:22 PM

EYE TALK
31 December 2011

It was the way sun made love to your eyes
and how they asked mine to dance,
mesmerising them,
wooing them,
courting them,
laughing with them,
holding them waltz-gently
then rumba-teasing,
tango-stirring,
paso doble-wildly ardent,
locking them in a momentary gaze
of then and thereafter,
telling them the love-story
we were yet to write
of auld lang syne
and skies still to dawn
with your hand on mine on one feather-quill,
leaving me breathless, smiling,
melted at the dream-bliss reality
of your breath in my face almost accidentally,
weak-kneed
needing kneading knowing
there was
no
going back
to wander-ways apart
no matter what we do or say or where,
Macushla mine.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-01-01 06:21 AM

This is mesmerizing in its beauty ...

It is quite simply awesome!

Love and Peace.
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2012-01-01 09:40 AM

Thank you, Margherita, for your kind words.

Owl

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2012-01-01 12:35 PM

Masterful word weaving to movement and to sound ...sigh.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-01-01 03:14 PM

As all the comments above...wonderful, my friend.

j.

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2012-01-01 05:04 PM

This whole poem is a dance of words; and you keep time so well.

It is delicate and vibrant all at the same time. Love it!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2012-01-01 11:27 PM

Thank you for seeing that, Belle.

Thank you, Jimmy.

Thank you, Nicole, for your beautiful reply.

Owl

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