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Reflections of the moon
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Reflections of the moon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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the moon above in heavens towers sits and ponders the nightly hours reflecting upon her past encounters of starry nights and meteor showers her celestial self so admired radiating to earth in full attire capturing the hearts of those earthly bound forever loved forever crowned crowned the queen of celestial nights adorned by shimmering starry lights always in the heavens high capturing my heart with breathless sigh Tracie Maree Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, the moon has probably had more poems written about it than even love, but then the moon and love go quite hand in hand, do they not? I liked this one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Tracie Maree, this is absolutely delightful. I am sure the Moonlady up there will show her appreciation by intensifying just a little her brightness, thus manifesting her gratitude. Margherita  |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh the Moon...she does that to me too; I love reading poetry about her. Very nicely done, I enjoyed this. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, the moon ... very nicely portrayed, my friend. Enjoyed the read... j. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
JerryPat, Margherita, Nicole & J thank you all for your wonderful replies, I appreciated it very much. I think lil Marge girl has been playing with my heart, I've been missing her lately and thinking about all her wonderful moon filled musings, so I guess I should also say - Thanks Marge girl  Love is the life of the soul... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice, Tracie. Some people can use rhyme very effectively.and you are one of them..This poem does well by its topic, and reads like a song. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Ice you will never know how much your words have touched me. I love to write poetry but I have never thought of myself as a great poet but I know with confidence here at PIP no one judges you and if they do it's with enthusiastic helpfulness, thats partly why I love these pages blue ~hugs~ TM. Love is the life of the soul... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This makes me smile... I like your moon pondering very much! *S* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks James & Suthern  Love is the life of the soul... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"crowned the queen of celestial nights adorned by shimmering starry lights" You know how to melt a heart. Beautiful write!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks JL, I'm pleased that you have enjoyed this Love is the life of the soul... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, Tracie Maree, this is beautiful. Breath taking. Thank you. A |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks for reading Allison Love is the life of the soul... |
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