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Immortal love |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198
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The touch of your lips the touch of your tongue sweetly over powers my senses our eyes speak of pleasure as we satisfy our sensual desires lifting us above the heavens beyond the pillars and posts of mortal man into the realm of gods, where our passion flames ignite Aphrodite's temple torches and the jealous gods transform us into an erotic marble statue a gift to honor the goddess of love our immortal love forever lives on. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love the imagery here, very sensual! Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Got carried away heah, didn't'ja, but carried away in a good way, my literary friend. ~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
true love...what a beautiful, personal tribute...enjoyed...thanks for sharing |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, the heavens above is where it all happens. Enjoyed your words! Helen |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
awww, how romantic...i love it  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautifully romantic! Enjoy your writting very much. Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully romantic and well written. I hope you can write another now that you're a marble statue....smile... Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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