Open Poetry #47 |
Madwoman of 5th St. |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I remember sweating body a mass of hurt knees were bloodied ripped on linoleum that's all I remember no recall of the event except for whip-cracks my scream, my scream at the savagery of it all my passion, your rage madwoman of 5th St. did you ride me down ©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Good gracious, Jerry. You drew me in with the title; and then reading this was like taking a shot of whiskey. One hot quick fire, that's still burning in my belly. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Thank you for your great response to the Madwoman of 5th Street, Nicole. Gotta love it . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This hurts to the core Jerry, bless your heart. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good Morning Birthday Girl. Good to see you here . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
wow. fire & brimstone man...!!!! even my keyboard is smoking..... LOL XOXO
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
P.S. I think I know her!
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Baby Girl. If you know her please don't tell her where I am. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
LOL your secret is safe with me, Mr. Pat!
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whew! Baby Girl. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Jerry is she hiding in your closet? Don't forget to look under your bed before you sack-out. At the end I was hoping for more scenes from this madwoman of 5th St. She seems so feisty. Enjoyed the read, Jerry!! So back to the top... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wow! JL, you scoured deep to find this one, thanks for reviving it. Haha . . . Uh, yeah, I checked all the right places. Don't think I could go another round with her. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
....lol enjoyed the poem and the replies Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hello, glad you liked my poetry this morning. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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