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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2011-12-31 07:45 AM

Another day, another year
global warming missing here...
Some days reflect the once upons
the midnight blues, the keeping on.

What little time, the insecure,
the weaving words, the want of more
of attic thoughts saved from the past
kept in the heart, their need to last.

Sighing moments devoted to
the prelude of tomorrow's new
to lessen then the sting of gloom
escaping to a waiting room

where dreams will bathe to occupy
and fill the hollow through mind's eye,
remembering the all of all
on this the day before night's fall.

Wishing for the new to be
real and not illusory~~~
M
(thank you to all the pip friends for
using many of your recent titles
as inspiration)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2011-12-31 08:22 AM

This is so cleverly written, and flows so easily. I LOVE this

Thank you for posting it.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-12-31 08:38 AM

"Wishing for the new to be
real and not illusory~~~"

Yes, to those lines, my friend. This time tomorrow we will begin our journey through 2012. What will it hold for us, only time will tell.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2011-12-31 09:09 AM

Your special touch very evident here, my friend...cleverly and well done...

j.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2011-12-31 10:17 AM

Maureen...I must say this was very smoothly written and enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2011-12-31 11:27 AM

Thanks everyone...I have been so tired out lately, I haven't been able to think enough to post anything new so I am always grateful when I can be inspired by other's titles or thoughts.

Wishing everyone a wonderful and safe New Years ( I probably won't be able to stay awake long enough

to see it in )

M

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2011-12-31 06:49 PM

wonderful writing as always

Gloom

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-12-31 07:39 PM

"What little time, the insecure,
the weaving words, the want of more
of attic thoughts saved from the past
kept in the heart, their need to last."

Absolutely!
Love this verse best, the entire write is great, but I can relate to this, for sure.

Happy New Year!!

JL

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

8 posted 2011-12-31 08:45 PM

interesting 'write' !

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2011-12-31 09:31 PM

Well done, Ms M.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2012-01-02 04:18 PM

Thanks, again~~ wishing everyone a Happy New Year.

M

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

11 posted 2012-01-03 03:41 PM

Great write... Liked it before I realized where you drew the inspiration. Fantastic job.

Michael

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

12 posted 2012-01-04 05:16 AM

absolutely gorgeous, you have well and truly been inspired - loved your work here, well done.
~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2012-01-04 02:38 PM

I find your creativity amazing, dear Maureen, it all is woven together so perfectly well. Beautiful inspiration!

Happy New Year to you too!

Love and joy.
Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

14 posted 2012-01-05 12:08 PM

Maureen,I always find your thoughts interesting and orginal. Enjoyed this one as well. Good to see you posting.jo

Bob K
Member Elite

since 2007-11-03

Posts 4208

15 posted 2012-01-05 04:46 PM

Reminded me warmly of Auden. I really enjoyed the sense of delving and playfulness here and the groundedness in the tradition. I think you had a typo of attic for antic, but that may just be me. Just wonderful; thanks so much. It really raised my spirits. Best wishes. Bob Kaven

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

16 posted 2012-01-05 10:29 PM

Yes it is! Just another day, and another year.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

17 posted 2012-01-06 02:32 PM

Love the flow and rhyme of this piece. There is much read here between the lines.

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

18 posted 2012-01-07 07:39 AM

Good Morning and thank you to each of you.

And Ruth I always try to leave a little between the lines. Happy Birthday to you.

M

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

19 posted 2012-08-10 01:30 AM

oh, so nice to read you again

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