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JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

0 posted 2011-12-28 03:11 PM

Alluring Hazel Eyes

Your hazel eyes are as alluringly as the sea, where
clarinet, flute, and violin in tearful-unison sing.
Songs of charm and traits of smiling-eyes personality.
Your smile a brownish pleasant shoreline
awash by a cool breeze and sea across coral reef.
It is there I dream of your allure,
deep in your hazel eyes…

I dream of mountains capped with snow:
your silhouette burnished against a morning’s glow.
It is there I dream of your hazel-eyes' lure,
a deep sleep, in your tempting eyes…

It is there in lush valleys of tall grass
swaying with a breath of wind;
sparkling birch tree leaves fluttering silver wing,
calling to warm and to nest the winter wren.
It is there I dream of you,
deep in your charming hazel-eyes,
where clarinet, flute, and violin in tearful-unison sing
of charm and traits of your personality…

Captivated and mesmerized
I do dream of you,
and there in my dreams
I am truly delighted by you,
and your alluring hazel eyes…

♦♦♦

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Sunshine

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1 posted 2011-12-28 03:37 PM

I've always imagined people with
hazel eyes as being really down
to earth types...

as well as a little mystical...

enjoyed this!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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2 posted 2011-12-28 03:59 PM

I liked this, JL.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
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Florida

3 posted 2011-12-28 04:42 PM

Well now, don't you make a girl wish she had hazel eyes?

This is truly lovely

luminosity
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4 posted 2011-12-28 05:27 PM

lol I always loved hazel eyes as well, when I was pregnant with my first baby, I dreamed it was a girl with hazel eyes...it wasn't...it was a boy with brown...still...love your poem

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-12-28 06:16 PM

Great write JL your made me feel quite special!
Lori

Margherita
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6 posted 2011-12-29 09:58 AM

You sing those hazel eyes beautifully, JL!

Rather than dreaming of hazel eyes, I dream of white capped mountains ... thank you for reminding me of them!

Margherita

Michael

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7 posted 2011-12-29 05:18 PM

quote:
where clarinet, flute, and violin in tearful-unison sing

I love that thought, can almost hear it. I think you've probably melted the heart of every woman with hazel eyes with this one. Beautifully done, friend.

Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

8 posted 2011-12-29 08:54 PM

Thank you Michael.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Alison

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9 posted 2011-12-31 12:11 PM

I have hazel eyes and always thought that they were so boring. I love this poem. It sings a song and I just rode along with every note. Yep, I love it.

A

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2011-12-31 02:45 PM

I also have hazel eyes and can appreciate your words~~

M

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2011-12-31 04:19 PM

Alison, Thank you. No, no, no Hazel eyes are beautiful!
(But that spinning smiley-face is hypnotizing me).
__________________________________

nakdthoughts, thank you.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

12 posted 2012-01-16 12:05 PM

With ever thicker corrective lenses covering my baby blues, they've lost any allure they might have had... and they didn't have much! LOL This is beautiful!!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

13 posted 2012-01-16 02:54 PM

I love blue eyes too, just don't think I
could do them justice in a poem.
Blue eyes are true eyes...

Thank you Ruth!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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