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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-12-26 06:33 AM

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look at it this way
your mind is at work
caprice is in session
holding consistency
yours is a growing
kindred romanticism
as you search filigree
embellished sky high
awaiting the abstract
spiraling moon beams
to swathe your body
with the love of a far
away one who only
appears in secret trysts
tempting fate for her
for she is your adytum
her face sacred, her
body a shrine of bliss
these wonderful trysts
are sweet to the bone
still, leaving us pseudo
fulfilled, wanting more
not now, maybe never
these few minutes of
love sharing is precious
she takes all the chances
in the fall of the sun

©December 24, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2011-12-26 06:38 AM

*sigh* this is just beautiful, leaves me wanting more

OMG! I just noticed the pic, it hadn't loaded when I was reading - it's gorgeous.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-12-26 06:44 AM

You started my day off pleasantly, tracie66, and thank you for doing that.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-12-26 10:59 AM

Jerry this is special. The pic is fantastic!
you really have been outdoing yourself these days my friend!

Lori

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 2011-12-26 11:04 AM

"for she is your adytum" I love this line; I so enjoy the word adytum in poetry. I tried to use it one time, but it wasn't a glimmer compared to this.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-12-26 11:06 AM

Thank you, Lori. I have been more or less inspired.

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Nicole, I understand about word you want to use not falling exactly in place as you desired them. Happens to me all the time. Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-12-27 04:27 AM

Very beautiful and touching. So deeply reflective of your high level awareness, Jerry!

Margherita

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2011-12-27 06:39 AM

You are on your game with this one, J.P.
Good stuff..

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-12-27 07:05 AM

Margherita, Your kind words are a good eye-opener this a.m., thank you.

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Appreciate you stopping by this morning, Ice, and thank you very much for your supportive thoughts.

You have two choices in life:
You can stay single and be miserable,
or get married and wish you were dead.

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